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and summer days.

model:~CherriShock

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:iconronaaa:
This image caught my eye the moment I saw it in my inbox.
It represents the free and uncommitted feeling of spending one's time in a beautiful place, as shown here as a field.
The picture tells a story, it shows fun and happiness and summer and good times. A song by Jack Johnson would probably go perfectly with it. =)
Although the partly unfocused book adds a kind of romantic feeling to the picture, I think that the sharp blades of grass on the right are a bit distracting.
Apart from that there's nothing I don't like about this picture, I'm quite into the position of the model and that only her legs and her hand are visible.
Altogether I think this is a lovely picture and it deserves much more attention. :heart:
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:iconrider1997219:
I went into the critiqueable area and this is the one that really caught my eye. I do like this though I'm having trouble figuring what the focus of the photo is. i do think that it looks like a beautiful place to read, calm and relaxing. The model did a wonderful job also. I love this piece though the focus is somewhat throwing me off, I'm also seeing more beauty in the piece because of it. I'm curious what book was used? This photo is eye catching and wonderful. I really do like this piece of art. Great Job!
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:iconclx:
Beautiful composition and focus.
Must have been a tranquil shoot. :)
:iconlexaarts:
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Why are you doing so great pictures?
*jealous*
lol.
Beautiful.

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:iconpinkparis1233:
baha it's just luck ;)
Thank you (:

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:iconpinkparis1233:
Thank you.
Yes, very, very tranquil place (except when a car came by and we had to duck since we were trespassing)

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:iconkiwischil:
Another masterpiece Ö Seriously, you're one of my favourite deviants <3
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Wow thank you. That just made my day :blushes:

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:icon50calwolf:
what a cute photo :) really nice ^^

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Thanks :)

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welcome ^^

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Jun 6, 2009, 7:14:53 AM

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